Love is stronger than anything. It is stronger than hate, jealousy, and anger. Love brings your family together. No one ever stays mad at someone forever because love helps them forgive. Love is a feeling we should not cower from but instead be willing to keep it within us for all eternity.
When someone hurts you on the inside do you give up the love for that person? Even if they did hurt you would you want something to happen to them? That where love has its power. Love is like a piece of string tying us all together. It has saved many people from depression because if you love someone you want them to be happy and if your depressed then your depression will rub off on the people around you. Love helps keep your loved ones in your heart. Love helps you remember them forever and always.
When someone loves you they show respect and kindness for your feelings. Being loved is a great thing. Then you know that people are always there for you and won't back away from you. Imagine what the world would look like if that happened with everyone. There could possibly be no wars, we could be able to live in a peaceful world. Everyone could learn to work together and share ideas and technology. If we all learned to love each other,or at least like each other, then we could accoplish more than what we have already. Love is friends, family, peace, and life.
Aww, you did a really good job! I like how this turned out.
ReplyDeleteThat was a pretty well written essay. One of the main things I look for is if you sound like an adult and you did sound like one. The only thing that you should maybe take a look at is it's more referring to real life and not about the book like how it relates to Francie or Mama or Neeley or Johnny. I think it's more about real life than it is about there life and your responding to the book. Overall, I think it was a well written essay and keep that voice. It was very strong and that's what's gonna grasp people to your writting so keep that up!
ReplyDelete